This is the feedback form I received from Simon following the presentation:
I was also told by Richard and Amber to be careful of cultural impirialism and that my practical side of the project needed more thought to tie it closer to the written side.
I then sat down and made a list of notes and new ideas for the project:
I think the idea of incorporating more theory into the whole project would be a better way of looking at the topic but I need to sit down and formulate all my ideas into an actual plan.
